Some of my further idea's were that the thing that causes the change would be the girl winning money on the lottery. Later on in the film she realises that her friends just hang around with her for the money, and aren't actually her true friends. At the end she rips up the lottery ticket and goes back to the life she used to have, and realises that she is happy.
Another idea would be that in her new life, she see's a homeless person on the street, with no money. This makes her feel guilty and so she doesn't want to live that life anymore. This then drives her to help the homeless person, give her money to charity and then rip up the lottery ticket.
Also, in her new life, she is constantly being pestered, her phone is always ringing with people asking her to buy things off them,her friends are always asking for money and she gets so fed up with it that she tears up the ticket, and goes back to her original life.
I decided to add in some further ideas because I didn't have a lot of detail in my other ideas. From doing this I now know what will cause the change to happen, as before I wasn't sure about what to do. Most of the ideas I've mentioned here I will probably use in my final product.
Again, I showed a copy of my further ideas to the same 10 people as before in my proposed ideas. They liked the idea of her friends being involved as this would reflect real life situations of seeing who a person's true friends really are. They also thought the idea of the homeless person would work well as it would help the audience to understand what the message in the film was trying to say. From this feedback, I have decided to add these extra ideas into my original ideas so that I have more detail in my short film and so that the message is portrayed well to the target audience.
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